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 NO NEED TO CHANGE WHAT IT SAY JUST THE START OF THE SENTENCES MAKE TRANSITIONS MAKE IT MAKE MORE SENSE BETTER ENDING NO NEED TO DO RESEARCH JUST USE WORDS LIKE ANOTHER, OTHERWISE, …. IN CONCLUSION BUT BETTER THAN THOSE WORDS 

In “The 6 Gaffe: Drake, Madonna, and the Art of Schmuckery,” Jeff Weiss argues that Drake is America’s biggest schmuck. 1) The Yiddish language’s ability to call someone a putz provides variation, but extreme precision. 2) Although Drake tries to be a “decent” person he always finds a way to mess it up. 3) We let a Canadian schmuck represent this generation so that just shows that we are schmucks as well. 4) Drake’s mantra “All I care about is money and the city where I’m from” shows us how much of an egotistical capitalist he is. 5) Even though Drake is a schmuck, he use’s it for his advantage. He does whatever he wants to do and has no shame for it. He has fun with his fame. 6) When Drake delivers a certain line, it speaks to people’s minds because of his sincerity. 7) Another example of Drake’s schmuck move is when he arrived 25 minutes late and wasn’t even noticeable because he played the Kid Ink song to make the crowd go wild. 8) Another schmuck move of Drake was when he came out and told everyone that he’s too good with words, is a legend, and that it’s too late for his city. 9) “Trophies” was an impressive performance with the added lyrics, wild crowd and flaming jets. 10) Drake has an ability to write songs but working with a voice coach really helped his rythm/lyrics flow better. 11) Drake was receiving a phone call from his mother during a performance is not consider a schmuck move. On the other hand, kissing Madonna and swiping off the kiss is consider a schmuck. 12) Drake performed w/ Madonna and it was gross, equally as gross as nudes of Vanilla Ice that was Madonna’s sex book. 13) Drake could’ve brought out close to any other popular rapper/singer, so why Madonna? 14) Weiss states that Drake chose Maddona as his partner performance to surprise his fans since she is an unusual pick. Maddano has build her career around her high maintenance image. He purposely wipe the kiss off to shock his fans and show how much of a God he is, or at least beliefs so, making him the biggest schmuck. 15) In the paragraph, the author mentions Drakes hits but he also says Drake claims he plays “the hits” yet he constantly mumbles his lyrics. 16) Drake is born with music, but the music that he made “all me” drags down the performance itself. 17) Our writer is disappointed with the festival and the whole festival but no one on the shuttle seems to agree. 18) While projecting images of sunsets and clouds, Drake repeatedly told the crowd they sounded great. Given more time, Weiss sarcastically observes, he half-expected the performer to screen The Notebook. 19)