Correction excercise

  1. Select one correction (mechanical, typo) in the  attached graded paper, such as pronoun use, appropriate vocabulary, sentence coordination, and so on.
  2. Log into the Purdue OWL ( and search for that term.
  3. Read the advice that comes up, and then edit the correction.
  4. Post here what correction you selected, what the OWL explained and advised, and how you edited your paper to eliminate the flaw and improve the text.