Keona Folston, Peer Review Paper 2 help

Please answer the following questions below. The report is attached.

  1. Does the introduction clearly announce the topic and engage the reader’s interest? If no, why not. If yes, what is engaging and interesting?
  2. Is there a clear sense of purpose throughout the writing? Do you understand the problem and the solution being presented? Why or why not?
  3. Is the solution effectively presented? Why or why not
  4. Are sources integrated into the proposal? Are they effective? Why or why not?
  5. How could the author improve the paper? Please offer at least two concrete suggestions.
  6. Do you consider this paper to be responsive to the assignment? If not, what recommendations do you have for making it meet the assignment requirements?
  7. Provide additional suggestions or comments here. As you are reviewing papers, think about this: what would you want to know about the paper you are reviewing if you were its author? In other words, provide useful, helpful, applicable advice to one another.

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