Revise a 3 pages essay

In a 3 page essay, describe the beauty of an ordinary place.

Please help me revise my essay, like the grammar mistakes, sentence structure, word choice etc, and add sth new, like what the “beauty” is.

Thesis:  The place is just an ordinary place in other’s eyes, but you have seek the deeper beauty of that place.

Would you please help me finish it in 3 hours from now?

I will really appreciate your help.

beauty.docx