Can you Edit and expand the attached Rough Draft into an increasingly well-reasoned and research-supported argument for your recommendation for your community. Take a fresh look at the draft. Consider the feedback the professor has provided in draft.
Draft #2 should be about 1750 words, approaching closer the length of the final proposal (2000-2250 words), inclusive of all sections, cover page to references, excluding appendix/ces. Components: Same as Rough Draft #1 attached.